Preliminary Task - Development - Draft Version (Contents Page)

This is my draft version of my contents page. The draft is going to be evaluated and then students will be asked to comment on the draft, commenting on what is a good aspect and what could be improved.

My opinion towards my draft copy of the contents I found this very 'busy' and unorganised. In my final copy I was going to rearrange the images to make the magazine contents more superior.

Students point-of-view:

Louis Irving -
Shannon's contents page I found was good but also included bad points such as, she should include few less images. The good points were the pictures of people engaging in worship or having fun during prayers or school activities follows the institution well and the variation of images was good.

Nick Porter -
The good points about the contents page as followed are clear title, good use of lures, pictures are spread out well, clear references to the genre and good use of consistent font.
However, the bad points of the contents page include, the table being unattractive/not very nice looking, the lures are good but could include more and the there is some dead space.

Eden Tanner -
In this contents page Shannon showed good and bad points in her work. The good included, the use of shapes for the images and the use of the logo as it was a consistent reminder of the school and it emphasises iconography.

Robin Saker -
I found Shannon's work not very good as I found quite a few bad points such as, lack of line-bordering on the featured photography, the font for the contents is too stretched and I think Shannon could add approriate coloured boxes for featured titles/labels.

Kieran Cottingham -
Whilst reviewing Shannon's developmental draft, I have found the good and bad points. The good points consisted of the colour scheme as it represents the housestyle for Trinity school and this makes the copy easy for the audience to read. One bad point that the draft has is that there are to many images all pushed together and this makes it hard to look at each one indivdually.

Harry Stone -
I like the layout of the contents page, I think that it is inviting and attractive. I do believe that the there are to many pictures on the page. This can make the page look to busy and overpowering. The images could also be made to stand out more. Using an outline or shadow would make them more attractive.